Monday, September 14, 2009

scraper bike

by MH

I am from Oakland were people get smoke all the day

I am from the scraper bike world
where we scrape all the day
this how it goes down
im cruzing down my scraper bike
im cruzing down my scraper bike
my scraper bike got bars
I don’t need a car
im cruzing down my scraper bike
I got 26 inches on my scraper bike
im scraping down my scraper bike
I go hard
like a bully on mars
or I might just push you going 18 dummy doing the push you
im cruzing down my scraper bike
im cruzing down my scraper bike.

4 comments:

Da'Vine said...

good poem but it could use some onomatopoeia but still that was a really good poem.

The Hatter said...

I really liked this poem. I liked the emphasis on the "scraper bike" part especially - it just screams scraper bikes. Yay.

Anonymous said...

i lyke ur p0em it waz really about 0akland lol.

James Luckett said...

I like that it booms with scraper bikes.