by nascar11
I am from
firm, shaking hands,
good 'ole banana pudding,
and the laughter of
my lil cousins playing
outside.
I am from
the smells of coconut,
and tropical punch drinks,
sugary cornbread, and lots
of good, funny, repeated
stories.
I am from
the loud engine
roars coming from the
colorful scrapers (a car)
riding down the steets
and the loud hip-hop
music coming from the
unique scraper bikes.
I am from
a family filled with
love.
Character Appearance
15 years ago
2 comments:
Your writing is really discriptive. I could almost taste your banana pudding and cornbread and see the scrappers driving past. Awesome writing!
i think that you;re wording in this poem was very nice, and you make your family sound so fun!
- kelson, and 8th grader
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