tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170404573779508690.post3136255626789435998..comments2023-03-29T05:32:45.083-07:00Comments on Thaler Scholars: The shape of your faceUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170404573779508690.post-54748838403823186632009-09-15T23:02:16.694-07:002009-09-15T23:02:16.694-07:00I respectfully disagree with you, Queen4ADay; I pr...I respectfully disagree with you, Queen4ADay; I prefer the flow in the original. However, I too love the word choice. To me, the least clear part of the poem is the ending. Perhaps the poet can enlighten me...J. Thalerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13063433498051496982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170404573779508690.post-40003233166559456952009-09-15T20:59:39.688-07:002009-09-15T20:59:39.688-07:00love the use of unorthodox words (clocking, reflec...love the use of unorthodox words (clocking, reflective ricochet, etc.)<br />would have flowed slightly better if it had been<br /><br />"In a place with gates and doors hundreds run,<br />and roar,<br />typing,<br />writing,<br />listening,<br />debating."queen4adaynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170404573779508690.post-1183826221392499582009-09-15T20:11:03.978-07:002009-09-15T20:11:03.978-07:00That's so amazing. L0v3 !tThat's so amazing. L0v3 !tAnnaleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07862816301222335489noreply@blogger.com